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[写作] 陈国辉:2008年2月16号雅思A类文章评析

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匿名  发表于 2011-8-10 04:15:35 |阅读模式

How important  for individuals and countries think about  future, rather than focusing on present?


  这个题目首先属于考得不多的人生思考题,广州新东方的雅思写作主讲陈国辉老师认为,可以从以下方面进行解释,下面也将给出广州新东方的雅思写作主讲陈国辉老师写的范文。


1. 基本的看法和论调


  雅思是注重文化的考试,一般说的观点不要太极端,尽量取比较温和或保守的看法为好,其次,需要从正反方去考虑,不能只是写一个方面,可以假设自己的论点的反方正确,推出不合逻辑或矛盾的说法,这样也可以起到论证自己的作用。本题关键词和难点都在于一个词:how的解释上。如何去比较呢?题目现成的就是2个成对的概念:个人与国家,现在与未来,因此可以在段落上分别谈论个人,国家的现在与未来,分析过分注重未来或者过分注重中现在的恶果以及相应的问题,这样的话也容易写好。


2. 以上写法的注意事项


  首先,要注意比较和对比关系的使用,其次,句型必须多些变化,不能全都是简单的主谓宾句子。用词方面,广州新东方的雅思写作主讲陈国辉老师认为,同义词非常重要,在广州新东方的雅思讲义,就有完整归纳的雅思写作高频高分词汇,同义词的使用对于快速掌握雅思写作的技巧非常重要。


陈国辉老师的范文:


Human beings are distinct from the rest of creature due to their ability to meditate, contemplate and probe forward. Not only in the case of individuals, countries alike are not immune from this fate, but there then lies another question: how important for both individuals and countries to think about future ,not just to narrow their mind within the occasion of the present?


What strikes me first is that individuals all have their own plan for life, with differentiated level of looking forward. But one thing would be sure that no matter how far they look ahead, they will certainly hold tight of this plan on the base of the present world to realize it and to look even further. On the contrary, we can find cases of having no plan at all, in which individuals are subject to somehow unpredictable fate for lack of present preparation. Therefore we should balance both future and present , but after all ,we must firstly keep fast hold of the present.


Then when my mind comes upon the matter of countries, things appear quite analogous. For any country ,we must have a plan on not just what to do now, but what to do in the upcoming decade ,even in some cases, in the advancing century. But as individuals cannot invest all their mind on their future, countries should also project their heed on present affairs like economic development and national defense. Again , we can happily conclude that countries  also root in the soil of presence and then harvest the fruit of the future.


 Still I hope every thinking object of the planet give adequate heed on the relation of presence and future , but not just swayed by the gale of metaphysics but also keep hold to the fort of pragmatism.

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